Learning Outcome #4
A peer evaluation that I am most proud of is:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wthah9WkHQgC6mc6o8MiCo9_PkSE7ZIX2-7K3sXP6iA/edit
I am most proud of this peer evaluation because I thought I used many codes instead of just focusing on one. In this specific evaluation I made a comment with at least one of each code. I am also proud of this evaluation because I thought that my comments really helped my partner write a better paper. Before when I would peer evaluate, I would mostly focus on local revisions. An example of the typical comments I would make are “Remember page numbers” or “Fix the citation here”. With the peer evaluation provided above I added thoughtful ideas on things to add, or to rework the thesis statement. On comment number two I write “I agree with Alyssa here. The thesis may need to be relooked at”. This quote is an example of the ideas code because it pertains to the thesis. These ideas may be more crucial in order to help my partner write the best essay they can. One thing that I want to do more in the future is to add more comments, and broaden the codes I use. I used all codes at least once, but I mainly focused on evidence. By making more comments I can use more codes helping my partner out to the best of my ability.